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Vainglory and Vanity by ~catnipkitty:iconcatnipkitty:



VAINGLORY

You sit high on your throne
of self-righteous dignity,
Forbidding others to
Climb those steep steps
To ease you down
Onto your feet

The muscles atrophy
And the skin
Slides over your bones
To hang and tremble
As you move,
Yet no one may
Come to save your body
As it slowly dries and shrivels

You shall feel,
Feel Death crawling
Upon your skin,
Inching its way
To your soul
As you sit on your throne,
Dying

Still,
No good soul
May rescue you from
Your definite demise,
For your pride would
Be wounded so...


VANITY

Time stands still
In the ageless mirror
Reflecting one image
For all eternity

Gazing into a reflection
Unable to tear the eyes away,
Lest disturb the calm
Serene waters of time,
And wrinkle like
Ripples across a lake

A modern Cassiopeia
Framed in the looking glass,
Forever young and beautiful
Lies down by the water
To gaze on an
Ageless reflection

The tides shall turn
And the still waters
Shall quake with rage,
Shall swallow the mirror,
And become nothing in the
Endless spiral of time
©2007-2009 ~catnipkitty
:iconcatnipkitty:

Author's Comments

These 2 poems are the 1st of the 7 deadly sins. The reason I put them together is because when I looked them up, one source had Vanity and the other had Vainglory (pride). :shrug: So I decided to do one for both! There are more to come, obviously. Hope you like them!!! :D

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:iconcatnipkitty:
Thank you!! :hug: I hope other people do too. :D

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:iconcatnipkitty:
:giggle: What would you do if they didn't?

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If you expect the unexpected, doesn't that make the unexpected, the expected?

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:iconashleyleopard:
I LOVE splits in stories and poems! I love that you combined these!

I'm going to sit and read these all...now I want to write a series based on the virtues. :3 I always want to write responses pieces...would you think that'd be weird if I did that?

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I'd break the back of love for you.


Put me down for a lifetime success
Give me credit, I'll find ways of paying.
:iconcatnipkitty:
Aww...that's sweet! You'd really do that for me? :flirty:

--
If you expect the unexpected, doesn't that make the unexpected, the expected?

There are only a few perfect people in the world. All the rest are right handed!

Go meet some cool cats who write! --> [link]
:iconcatnipkitty:
Thanks!! :hug:

Dude!! I was thinking of doing the virtues next!!! :XD: And I wouldn't mind if you did them!! We could make this our combined thing!! I'll do the sins, you do the virtues!!! :highfive:

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If you expect the unexpected, doesn't that make the unexpected, the expected?

There are only a few perfect people in the world. All the rest are right handed!

Go meet some cool cats who write! --> [link]

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